[ And when it's on his skin, Haruhi's face turns red. She didn't expect Kyon's heart to be beating so fast. In fact, it kind of... turns her on a little. ]
Is this okay?
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[ And when it's on his skin, Haruhi's face turns red. She didn't expect Kyon's heart to be beating so fast. In fact, it kind of... turns her on a little. ]
Is this okay?